Not bad, not bad...
You have great ideas so far, especially when this was whipped up. You are doing excellent, but remember the animation is not only the foreground, but the background. When the sensei, I believe, was hit with the psi ball you should make the background move with his body, but excellent skill for just beginning. I enjoyed it thoroughly and can not wait to see when you have a planned out animation.
Here is some constructive criticism...
okay start drawing ideas out in a notebook, do some narrative work. You had a good idea but it botched. Try getting some friends to look at your work critically before putting it up for jury, try and thumbnail your work for later pieces and make sure your timing is better. Besides that, you are going into a right direction.
Thanks 4 the tip man. I am going to that you said
Claymation was up to par, the comedy was pretty awesome, and I'm genuinely impressed, great job :D
Good try, but no cigar...
Dood, the controls are horrible, however, you did a great job with sound and graphics, so your effort is not overlooked. I think you might of screwed up on your scripting somewhere, but work this game over a little bit more and I can waste a lot more time on it. Valiant effort :D
thanks for the input
This is pretty excellent, keep on doing what you are doing and you will get somewhere.
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